ruang atau kesempatan
ruang atau kesempatan
yang menlekatkan kasih berakrab
menjernihkan rindu
dalam bahtera rayuan masa lalu
suara mika
bingit menjerit, mentertawa
pancaran indera berlogika
tumpuanku hanya padu
deria ku bercelaru
menerpa
disini ada hidup yang tak terbahas
namun aku puas
/dzan
august 2005
posted by dzan at 9:42 PM
7 Comments:
Mengapa deria bercelaru
sedang tumpuan mu padu
Kan ALLAH yang paling tahu
setiap langkah,
setiap bicara yang terluah
atau tersimpan dalam hati tersembunyi
tak perlu dibahas tentang hidup
kalau taman penyembahan sentiasa redup .....
11:04 AM
deriaku
sering bercelaru sebab
riang ria anak2 yg sering mengganggu
cool stuff sis...
11:37 AM
HeHe....dapat ilham dari u...
Kalau pasal riang ria anak-anak...Alhamdulillah
ingat suara tangisan tadi....
All the best ...K
11:47 AM
he he he.
btw..this poem is abt my journey ferrying my wife to and fro from work..while the kids in the back seats.
12:28 PM
Check kat dict. DBP, kalau tak nak guna bercelaru boleh guna haru-biru
but antara deriaku haru-biru
menerpa
dgn deriaku bercelaru
menerpa
still prefer the latter....
Oh..Well.....just my 1 cent
9:24 AM
Hello Dzan,
A while back I got comments, made under the guise of anonymity, in my blog. This particular line was interesting to me:
"i came here because someone 'recommended' ur site. "it deserves a more serious criticism.." or so he said. i fear that u're not ready for 'it'. someone said 'ure' ready.. undoubtedly he was wrong"
Because it reminded me of our e-mail correspondence previously (the one that was not to be published publicly, remember?). I remember you said the exact same thing, although in a different manner.
Anyways, if you are privy to the identity of said anonymous person who commented this, please tell him/her to make his/her way to my blog. The person wanted an "intellectual debate", and I am keen on obliging.
And please tell him/her to use a name or something this time around? Being anonymous lacks integrity, wouldn't you agree?
If you don't know head or tails about this particular incident on my blog, then my apologies.
9:16 PM
bro shahriman,
it wasn't me..or anyone i knew. apologies accepted.
/dzan
10:04 PM
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